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Are we really from the same place
You and I?
Did we  really end up on this road
In the same winds of disaster
With the road wrecked by rogues
Presidents, priests?
Supposedly.
Aesthetically it seems so.
Apparently.
Your god says we all come from her,
Does she not?
So how is it that
Everything that you stand for
Is everything I can't stand?
To me your morals are
Simply your wrong-doings
Your faults
And to you?
I'm not sure even your god could answer that one.

Perhaps I jumped from my hammock
Above the matter
Prematurely.
Or perhaps just alien.
©2009 ~Beckieflitz
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Author's Comments

I've been reading some poetry by people with different creative styles to me..
I think this may be slightly different to my normal style, but it is still all my own work.
Just thinking about people and thoughts and questions.

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:iconart-e86:
This has some interesting lines Beckieflitz :-

Your god says we all come from her,
Does she not?


It's about time the "God was a man" thing had some competition.

Seriously though - very thought-provoking - I will be going back a few times to re-read this one.

:thumbsup:

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I don't believe in God because when I asked him he said he didn't believe in me.
:iconbeckieflitz:
Aww thank you so much!
I'm really glad you like it. :D
xx

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The scrawlings of an idiot. :boing:
:iconart-e86:
:thumbsup::D

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I don't believe in God because when I asked him he said he didn't believe in me.

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