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A jigsaw scattered on the floor
His life is now in tatters
He wanted something more.
Just that one little break,
But 'The One' left him alone again
It's all too much to take.
All those cold, hard nights
The long, lonesome days
Even simply coping is now a fight.
He looks at all the 'bad' guys,
They're happy with their lovers,
But nobody hears this good guy's sighs.
His kind heart gave what she wanted and more,
But she never really cared,
Left his heart, a jigsaw, on the floor.

So here's to all the good guys,
The ones that really care,
I hope that you'll one day be happy
And your heart you'll share.
©2007-2009 ~Beckieflitz
:iconbeckieflitz:

Author's Comments

Ah it's nothing good at all. Just thinking really, I have seen a lot of nice guys get hurt, while the not so good ones are happy. How is that fair?
Anywho, enjoy? x

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:iconnaddykoo:
Like it and its soooooo true!
Me too hope they are happy one day and the bad guys are left in the gutter

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live life the way you choose
:iconbeckieflitz:
Thanks. xx

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The Scrawlings Of An Idiot :boing:
I will eat you with my manliness.
:heart: Luka
:iconnaddykoo:
Your welcome xx

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live life the way you choose
:iconskierian:
I can see why Luka is so crazy about you. You are very sensitive and it shows that you think about other people and how they feel. I like the poem, it's very expressive. Kind of hurts a little though, or at least it would if I were a 'good' guy.

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I want to be needed
I need to be wanted.
:iconbeckieflitz:
Aww thank you.
Hey, from what I have heard about you, it seems to me you're a very good guy.
And actually this was partly inspired by recent happenings with you, if you get what I mean.
I hate seeing nice people getting hurt. xx

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The Scrawlings Of An Idiot :boing:
I will eat you with my manliness.
:heart: Luka
:icondanielmercieca:
This made me cry. T.T

(Because it's so goddamn trueeee. x.x)

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If I shot myself for every stupid joke I've ever made...I'd be dead.
:iconbeckieflitz:
Really? Sorry for making you cry. xx

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The Scrawlings Of An Idiot :boing:
I will eat you with my manliness.
:heart: Luka
:icondanielmercieca:
It wouldn't have made me cry if it wasn't good. ^.^

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If I shot myself for every stupid joke I've ever made...I'd be dead.
:iconbeckieflitz:
Aww thank you. xx

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The Scrawlings Of An Idiot :boing:
I will eat you with my manliness.
:heart: Luka

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