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Sunkissed,
The warm tender ray tongues
Lapping at the ticklish skin
The outside feeling blissful
Just like the sun-filled soul
And drenched in sunlight
You'll smile at me
And tenderly we'll touch
The other's face
And we'll walk along the distant paths
Holding hands in the sun
And you will be
Sunkissing me.
©2008-2009 ~Beckieflitz
:iconbeckieflitz:

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Totally fiction, but it's really warm over here and my face has caught the sun so I felt slightly inspired. Haha. x

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:iconhuliojules:
Hi! Nicely written :sun: "sunkissing" hihi

sun does similar things to me these days, wrote "A beat to keep up to" in that spirit

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It is the spectator, and not life, that art really mirrors! Oscar Wilde.
:iconbeckieflitz:
Thank you! :)
Glad you like it.
And yes, the sun seems to do that to everyone. But that's good. :) xx

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:icont-annorax:
Hi there !...very nice as always :D... yay for the sun :D

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:icongotenkun:
SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET!!!!! :D i love this one!

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"If two people share one, their destinies become intertwined"
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:D
I'm so glad! :)
I love the sun. It makes everyone so happy. xx

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:iconshadowmax76:
x3 rawr~ attracted to happiness i am.

xD :ahoy: nature is a lovely thing.

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There shouldn't be a reason in order to interact with someone, other than that you can.
Do not fear affecting someone's life, the only person to blame is the one who can't handle love.
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I seem to just attract complications, and not really be attracted to anything that works or I can have.
It can be lovely, but when you're sat freezing in the pouring rain waiting for a bus.. it's not all that great. ;p xx

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:iconshadowmax76:
x3 time to change things perhaps,

mm.. :heart: memories of walking in the rain,

i never was one to shiver[x-x' i just go numb], xD but just enjoy that i can be as wet as a swim and not be able to drown in a heavy down pour. [isn't a great swimmer TT_TT ]

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Evasive boredom gets the best of us procastinating fuckers.
There shouldn't be a reason in order to interact with someone, other than that you can.
Do not fear affecting someone's life, the only person to blame is the one who can't handle love.
:iconbeckieflitz:
Haha rain is horrid though. And my hair goes frizzy.
I'm a good swimmer, I just don't go swimming as I don't like my body.. xx

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